Arx Poetica

The third scriptsavvy analysis is interesting for what is not in it, there is no reference to the religious element being a negative element, no hint to trim religious speeches or anything. The only reference is in stating Teancum is deeply religious, and in their synopsis where they see clearly the religious differences between Amalickiahs [...]

Aha now I can update this again. I had the second scriptsavvy analysis back with higher scores in important areas, and have used the past month working hard on enhancing the screenplay more. I cannot say enough about the scriptsavvy competition analysis. And how well it helps get a screenplay into shape. It’s a very [...]

Mark Parker posted on the forum topic My ever more complex and time consuming screenplays. in the group Script Writing:

I had another script consultant in the US analyse my screenplay, and she has some reservations about the public appeal of a movie based on the Book of Mormon with so much religion in it.
I may be able to cut down on some of the religious speaches a bit, but perhaps she [...]

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Shane Brown posted on the forum topic My ever more complex and time consuming screenplays. in the group Script Writing:

Mark, man, seriously, great luck, and blessings to you from above! It looks like you got pretty good scores, so if anything, you at least know more where you stand in things, and you know specifically where to improve! Awesome!

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Mark Parker posted on the forum topic My ever more complex and time consuming screenplays. in the group Script Writing:

Screenplay is back on the dyno at script savvy after some serious tuning, see what happens this time. Let you know the score in one month. It looks like it really benefits from describing the hand to hand sword fighting, which maybe I should do more. Apart from some Spanish historic documents I don't know [...]

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Anthony Applegate posted on the forum topic My ever more complex and time consuming screenplays. in the group Script Writing:

Good work. Hope your movie gets made soon. We need more great Bible and Book of Mormon movies. Feel free to ask for some help, I'd love to be involved (not sure how much help I could offer though, "sigh").

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